Ember Casey

  • hebs78har citeretfor 4 dage siden
    Luca’s waiting for me in the foyer when I head downstairs.

    Scene should be more climactic of a moment when he sees her all dolled up for the first time

    Also, I was not planning on proofreading or noting my edits and suggestions but this was too much of an egregious mistake and disservice to be ignored

    There are numerous errors and edits to be addressed before this

  • hebs78har citeretfor 4 timer siden
    ?” There are some grass and dirt stains o

    Singular or Plural: 'are' or 'is'

    'There are some grass and dirt stains on'

  • esisay017har citeretsidste år
    I swear, the last time I glanced at the time it was three o’clock.”
  • Darijana Tothar citeretfor 11 dage siden
    It’s hard to remember the number with Calder’s mouth teasing my ankle and his fingers caressing my thigh.
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